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Jedan tren između svjetla i tame--
mjesec stane prije prijelaza--
ja stanem gledati prazno noćno nebo.
Oči nam se sukobe
(a rat blijedi kad se zatvore.)
Ipak, bila je brižna.
Otišla je opstati,
tražiti sjedinjenje.
Ono što vlada tamom je samo.
Lako je gledati,
izbor za one koji vide:
"Za tisuću dijamanata,
vizionar traži pobjedu
međ tisuće proročanstava,
sva jasna kao dijamanti."
I blijesak donosi zoru.
Bijahu li goli bludni?
(ona kaže da bijaše razloga)
Nemoćni objasniti gubitak života,
ležeći u magli odraza,
jedan drugog,
u apsurdnim oblicima.
Zora otkriva maske žalosti.
Prodiru zrake,
svjetlo sunca s njima.
On ih više ne želi vidjeti,
umjetnik se bori tamu zarobiti.
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"Give it to me."
As he stood there, I couldn't help but notice veins on his forehead.
"You know what that is. It's mine."
Sharp, wiggly, protruding veins. Almost as if I could feel the blood in them. He must've had a soaring headache.
"Do I really need to repeat myself? It's my property."
Adrenaline. Sweat. Tension. It was coursing through him. Doubt.
"Don't test me! Hand it over!"
His look-
"Now, worman!"
"Yes. Now, man. Now."
The smell of burnt flesh, melted bone and boiled fluids filled my lungs.
That is how I named myself Irene.
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Mature content
Tan :iconcrystalseeker:CrystalSeeker 2 12
"A butterfly was flying up in the sky. It was so tiny and fast! Then came another butterfly. And  another. The sky turned purple. More butterflies. My Mum screamed and picked me up from the sandbox and then there was a big light and then she was gone. The butterflies take the big people away, but they leave us kids, that's what Dad told me later. That's when I first saw'em."
Major Lint lost track of the girl at the word purple.
"Can I go now? I gotta go find Dad too."
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I don't hate you
But many others do
It puzzles me too
They treat you like poo
Just wait and see
It'll end quite well
With a show and tell
And a delightful glee
'Cause I'll be here
Always shouting a cheer
For you, my colleague dear
And the silence we hear
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Wind and Wheat
Gentle fingers
Yellow sea
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Under the wood
Waiting patiently
Hope forms
Under the rays
Cheering out
Life flows
Over the field
Drawing shadows
Grass feels
Over the road
Singing lullabies
All falls
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Crimson road
Empty red hallway
Footsteps echo right by me
Shadows are near us
Our voices muddled and lost
Walls become sanctuary
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We are here for you
I have to choose. Again.
"Well, let's see... Ah, Mr. Albren, since this is your 50th switch, you will have an additional option." The clerk, a fat-faced heap of boring lard, shifted his massive weight and leaned forward. The chair creaked. The table grunted too. "You can take the X-F200 model, standard class, or the Y-F300, also standard class, as before, or you can participate in our new test program."
50th? Already?
The sliding doors on each side of the room opened, and from each came out a thin, sturdy reel of metal. Hanging on the left; black, crappy skin tossed on lumps of meat supposed to be hands and legs and a torso, all sewed together by a thermolaser. On the right, the same - jets included.
"I understand you have a debt problem, Mr. Albren. If you participate in our program, it will be cleared, and you might even be able to upgrade. Also, your original content will be preserved for future generations."
"You mean my head?"
Of course he meant that. Stupid question. Wait, he sai
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Loud, crisp and high
His pain is a sigh
Falling, sinking and dying
His wings fail at trying
Black, dark and grim
His past haunts him
Abyss, pain and sorrow
His sights only know
Love, warmth and bliss
His wish is this:
"A gust!
My lungs lust for air
It is unjust!
My task is not fair
How am I to do?
My star is lost
And this I did for You?
My torch is now frost
I ask of You,
(My mind will go mad!)
I had known so much of You,
My jinx was sad
I wish it all back,
My past words, I kill
It was, I know, an attack
My mouth has no skill
Show a light, I follow
My wish is not hollow"
Wanting, waiting and watching
His hands shook, grasping
Nothing, oblivion and damnation
His arms found frustration
But, far (or nigh?)
A spark is high
Day, Sun and Clouds
His might forgot his shrouds
Shining, strong and bright
His wings bring glory and flight
Joy, music and song
His task was long
And so, now with his Lord
His truth was his sword
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DevID 9.01.2008 - by KSCH by CrystalSeeker DevID 9.01.2008 - by KSCH :iconcrystalseeker:CrystalSeeker 0 0 Desktop 19.12.2007 by CrystalSeeker Desktop 19.12.2007 :iconcrystalseeker:CrystalSeeker 0 1
Prosjak - Translation Chain 3
Bio je usamljena primjedba
Betonskom gradu; sam
Kao vrana na kiši, ležao je
Kao šaka nasred trga
Nije imao natpis, ni tužaljku velikih slova
Za milost; miris njegov - oštar
Kao krajolik mu lica - rekao je sve
Krnje noge su uskličnik
Kada su ga kišni oblaci odveli, ostavio je
Siluetu od krede na zemlji
Translated from the original poem,
"A Beggar", by Kristoffer M. Miracco
Prijevod pjesme u originalu "A Beggar", napisao Kristoffer M. Miracco
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      Style is what she seeks
    Glamour - one of her needs
         Pleasure is her high
             That's no lie
              Only a tiny
                 A hint,
                 A dash,
           And all is ready.
      A sway on the catwalk
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Seeker of the Crystal.
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I'll manage! Somehow! I will!

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farli1011 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
EEE! Di si ti? Nema te za cut ni vidit ode. Kako si?
CrystalSeeker Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Auf, bubnjali smo, vježbali prvo par dana pa onda bili u Omišu. Opravljao se zadnja dva dana. xD

Kao što vidiš, ništa novo na dA-u. Nemam para na mobu, sorry. Iz yu free today?
farli1011 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Kvragu, I missed you za tri sata. Crap. Anyway, babysittam stan priji u pon, ut i sri pa mozemo tamo ucit. Ima vode, klima, pas i macka. :) Javit cu ti se u ned navecer ili u pon ujutro za detalje. Sve najbolje, Tea
CrystalSeeker Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Pasić i mačkica, jeeeeeej! :D
farli1011 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
HELLO! Coffee, tomorrow? Give me a call, I'm broke. All best, as always :)
farli1011 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Eej, upoznala san curu kojoj je rodendan isti dan kad i meni, 3 god mlada, iz Poljske. Jel ides na ono za prijemne?
edzull Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2009
Thank you fellow flasher!
farli1011 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Ej, jesi cita sta kod mene ono Death of the ... Ch?
CrystalSeeker Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Al nisam komentira?

Jesam pročita sam sve, dapače, ugodno me iznenadilo, sve osim zadnjeg poglavlja. Tamo ću se raspisat, ček.
farli1011 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Zadnjeg poglavlja kojeg sam objavila dosad ili cekas dok ne objavim kraj price/zadnje poglavlje pa ces se raspisat?
Cujemo se.
Laku noc.
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